Work on transitions. The words should not just pop on the screen or flow all the way across. Continuity is key. The type treatments need to be similar so they seem more unified.
Imagery is working, but the resolution on the tablecloth needs to be lower so that the movie loads faster. Also, wine does not work like a pie graph. The wine should go down vertically, not horizontally.
The animation is a bit choppy, and I need to work on timing. Reading the text out loud will help.

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